I annotated this through the eyes of another reader.
Conclusion
As we continue to advance as a species, we will continue to create great things
that require our whole focus, thereby forgetting about the footprint we leave
behind. Trash may not be a delightful thought, but its derivatives are even
less so. Understanding the different types of waste and what they can do to us
should drive us to consider our footprint a little more heavily, and do the
world and everyone in it a favor by treating trash a little more seriously than
just trash.
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Must fix the
first-person speech
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Wraps up thesis
of the essay?
Body paragraphs + ideas
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Body Paragraph 1
o Waste exists because we create it.
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Breaks down
different types of waste
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Body Paragraph 2
o The extent of the waste process that the normal
American sees usually does not go far beyond putting the trash bin on the curb,
and knowing the a garbage truck will pick it up to dump it in a landfill
somewhere
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Mentions what it
would take to improve air quality
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Does not go very
deep into the current quality of air or how badly waste affects us now
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Body Paragraphs 3
and 4
o Rather than dispose of waste more efficiently, people
have tried using excessive amounts of waste as a resource instead.
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Introduces two successful
methods that have been used to manage/utilize trash
o These two methods are successful examples of what
efficiency in waste treatment can achieve
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Breaks down the
ideas introduced in the previous paragraph, and author shares his own ideas
Thesis
Trash is very harmful to our
environment, therefore it is in our best interest to understand the types of
waste we produce, how it affects us, and explore methods to treat solid waste
as efficiently as possible.
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